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Tuesday, March 16, 2021

Writing - When I turned into a lion

  Encounter with an endangered species


Instructions: 

You wake up and you’re transported into the body of a lion.  While you’re in a daze trying to transition into your new  body  the King of the Jungle you encounter a baby …   



Challenge:  Write this scene—discover how it got there, why it is there, what to do with it now.


Gold: 4-5 paragraphs (daily entries)

Silver: 3-4 paragraphs (daily entries)

Bronze: 2-3 paragraphs (daily entries) 


Planning:

Introduction:
-What, Where, When, Who, Why?

I wake up in the body and I see myself as a lion and I scream ( roar ).

I ask myself what happened to me, where am i and when did this happen. 

What happened first:


I go exploring to see if I can find someone to help me turn back into my proper self.

What happened in the middle:


I find a baby and try to see if it can help me I go exploring with it and we then find someone. It was a grown human the human screamed and took the baby.

What happened next:

The person to me somewhere and I was very confused someone walked in the room and put me to sleep. I then later woke up and I was a human again.

Conclusion:

I was so happy and I went home. I then lived happily ever after.



Suddenly

Shocked

magnificient

mortified

Chills up my spine

transported

Bitterly cold

disillusioned

exposure

toddler

Painfully cold

morphed



Start writing:  I was recently turned into a lion and I don’t know what to do.

I went exploring and I was so confused and shocked  because when i went to bed I was a human and woke up in a sunny magnificent  place with lovely bright green grass with flowers everywhere I was so happy but confused.


I then went exploring and I found a baby I wondered if the baby could help an I picked up the baby and put it on my back I took it with me on my adventure later on me and the baby were at a little village and a woman walked to me and the baby she screamed and then she took the baby and put me in a room.


I didn’t know what to do and I didn’t know where was either I walked away and I then saw another woman walk in the room I was so scared that something was going to happen to me but nothing really happened she put me to sleep I woke up as a lion again and then she told me to go sleep or it wouldn’t work and then a few hours later I woke up and I was in my bed again as a child.


I was so happy and I lived happily ever after.



This is my writing I hope you enjoy.

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